tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114922669156042352.post4486885232181582385..comments2023-04-03T20:35:37.116-03:00Comments on One Word At A Time: SYTYCW?Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15696255304905485685noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114922669156042352.post-66015910325835273602010-11-08T19:05:39.571-04:002010-11-08T19:05:39.571-04:00I have almost the opposite problem - I can get mor...I have almost the opposite problem - I can get more into my hero's emotions than my heroines sometimes. Of course, the heros often try to bury their feelings, pay attention to the physical. Actually, I think the evolution of those emotions are the heart of the story for me, so it's okay if the emotion is there, but only hinted at in Chapter 2. <br /><br />I haven't kept up with this - too much going on -- but I am interested in the podcasts so I hope they are archiving them somewhere!<br /><br />Best of luck which ever way you go Anne!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00205025424737829934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114922669156042352.post-65654761483720198712010-11-08T12:57:12.349-04:002010-11-08T12:57:12.349-04:00Cat, I just read on an eharl thread that the MS ha...Cat, I just read on an eharl thread that the MS has to be finished. They didn't put that in the rules so I'm not sure what I'll do. If the MS has to be finished I might as well just go the proposal route. That way I can send three chapters.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15696255304905485685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114922669156042352.post-32143980046499357052010-11-08T10:35:45.901-04:002010-11-08T10:35:45.901-04:00I tried to keep up, but it moved at a lightning pa...I tried to keep up, but it moved at a lightning pace. Lots of good info. The critiques of first pages and query letters was informative. I downloaded the podcasts to listen to this week. <br /><br />Good luck with your Desire ch 2. I've had similar problems before. In the beginning, sometimes lust is all there is.<br /><br />What an awesome opportunity with the first chapter submission. Pick whichever is strongest.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05663703767093923242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114922669156042352.post-67347522728553409652010-11-06T19:29:41.457-03:002010-11-06T19:29:41.457-03:00Yes, I have a difficult time with having my alpha ...Yes, I have a difficult time with having my alpha males be emotional.<br /><br />And thanks, Janet. I am feeling better.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15696255304905485685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1114922669156042352.post-15167198435111055202010-11-05T23:10:25.267-03:002010-11-05T23:10:25.267-03:00No to all of the above - but I have my fingers cro...No to all of the above - but I have my fingers crossed for you, Anne (you know, when you get to deciding what you're sending in :)<br /><br />And I happen to love a hero who thinks "she's hot let's just do it." I believe most of heroes are built from that same cloth. I mean, really - real life men don't do emotion.<br /><br />Hope you're feeling better :)Janethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13297537075103893956noreply@blogger.com