I wish I could edit on the computer. For some reason, I can't "see" my words on the screen.
My first drafts are clay, unformed and only hinting at the final piece. I reread on the computer, fixing and correcting and deleting overuse of adverbs and adjectives, then I print it out. And I'm shocked! I expect to still have work to do but surely it read so much better? On screen it did.

For some reason I can't see the flow of the words on the screen. And it's slowing me down. I have to print it out and edit several times before it sounds remotely good enough. What is it about the computer screen that makes me not be able to "see" it?
I used to write my first draft by hand and I've taught myself to do that on screen. It's sped up my first draft process tremendously. Now I'd like to speed up the editing process. I know I have to print off a hard copy for final edits but surely there's a more efficient way to do the initial clean up?
Any techniques that help you edit on the screen? Or do you print it out and edit on hard copy after each session, chapter?
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I always edit or critique way better on hard copy. I think maybe because then I'm reading it more like a 'book'.
So do I, Kelly.
I think I might start printing out my day's pgs in the evening. Then do a quick read and revise before proceeding. That way it won't seem so massive when I have to edit.
I prefer to read through and edit the first time on paper! For some reason I feel like I'm being more productive. Go figure. Good luck with your sub and your GH entry :)
I had a prof tell me once that we aren't hard-wired to read as well from a back-lit screen, and I agree.
Julianne's suggestion about formatting it to look like a book helps me quite a bit, even if I'm reading it on-screen. I find doing that catches a lot of stuff I miss with the "writing format". And then when I really want to go through it, I print it off.
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