Opening lines are so important. I've spent all morning trying to come up with something that will grab the reader and I think I've succeeded.
We had a great session yesterday with Cathryn Fox about pitching. I've come up with a movie comparison:
Fatal Attraction meets Midnight in the Garden of Good and Evil. What do you think? What does it make you think of?
Goal for next week: Chapter 1 Revised and sent to online crit group.